Wednesday, 25 February 2009
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Unconventional burdens do heavily weigh
Familiar shoulders do shrug and sway
A path in the wild
The whim of a child
Right and wrong, now gray and black
A bag of rocks, yet the body not slack
A clandestine fantasy or a well-thought adventure?
A misled errant or a guided lure?
-Ketaki
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I quite did not understand the last 4 lines..The first 4 lines kind of yell out the anxiety of a person who wanna break out bonds and wanna know searching for his/her fantasy! That's how I understand it...Can you elaborate what thought actually goes into the poem!! ?
Does the last lines debate whether going to pursue someone's non-so ordinary fantasy right/wrong? Kindly Explain!!