hey I just started writing a story, if you get free time then please read it and post comment!
http://weblog.xanga.com/bewildered_bison
Thanks! Stranger
By the way I showed interest cause I really liked it! You got talent brave woman.
@LittleFriend42 - Give me a break! 'sweet' is not the word for the pervert!!! I think its 'sadistic'
@bewildered_bison - He finds it sweet, for her it is as terrible as death
Sorry to bother you again, but why sweet death?
Well I actually saw that too, when I closed my eyes for second time. But I never expected that you are so brave to write about it! Well also I thought if I write this and you meant something else, you might think I am a pervert. Well that reeking breath never fits in to the leukemia explanation. Looking forward to read more.
@bewildered_bison - Hi. First of all, thank you for having read my poem. It means a lot to a writer when strangers take the time to browse through her work and mull over it. Coming to your interpretation, I am afraid you are too far off the mark! This was in connection with Pedophiles. The familiar eyes were those of her uncle, as were the unfamiliar lips. To her, he was "uncle"; to him, she was his "sweetheart". That's when her childhood falls apart, but she can tell no one. So she is silent, yet her soul is screaming. Hence, the use of "silent scream".
By the way, as of now, all other readers got it!
What's up? Thank you for accepting my friend request. I am actually awaiting for your response on the comment I posted for your poem "It's all in the family"
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hey I just started writing a story, if you get free time then please read it and post comment!
http://weblog.xanga.com/bewildered_bison
Thanks!
Stranger
By the way I showed interest cause I really liked it! You got talent brave woman.
@LittleFriend42 - Give me a break! 'sweet' is not the word for the pervert!!! I think its 'sadistic'
@bewildered_bison - He finds it sweet, for her it is as terrible as death
Sorry to bother you again, but why sweet death?
Well I actually saw that too, when I closed my eyes for second time. But I never expected that you are so brave to write about it! Well also I thought if I write this and you meant something else, you might think I am a pervert. Well that reeking breath never fits in to the leukemia explanation. Looking forward to read more.
@bewildered_bison - Hi. First of all, thank you for having read my poem. It means a lot to a writer when strangers take the time to browse through her work and mull over it. Coming to your interpretation, I am afraid you are too far off the mark! This was in connection with Pedophiles. The familiar eyes were those of her uncle, as were the unfamiliar lips. To her, he was "uncle"; to him, she was his "sweetheart". That's when her childhood falls apart, but she can tell no one. So she is silent, yet her soul is screaming. Hence, the use of "silent scream".
By the way, as of now, all other readers got it!
What's up? Thank you for accepting my friend request. I am actually awaiting for your response on the comment I posted for your poem "It's all in the family"